A Mail-Order Bride’s Hidden Past – Extended Epilogue


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The sun rose over Whispering Pines, casting a warm glow over the small town nestled in the heart of the American Wild West. As the town stirred to life, the streets bustled with activity, and the aroma of freshly brewed coffee wafted through the air.

Maggie and Thomas stood side by side on the porch of their quaint little store, watching as the town came to life before them. It had been six months since their wedding day, and life had never been better.

“I can hardly believe how much our lives have changed,” Maggie said, her voice filled with wonder.

Thomas nodded, a smile playing at the corners of his lips. “It’s been quite the journey, hasn’t it? But I wouldn’t change a single moment of it.”

Their eyes met, and in that silent exchange, they reaffirmed the love and commitment they shared.

As the morning sun bathed them in its golden light, they turned back to the store, ready to face whatever the day might bring.

Inside, the store was already bustling with customers eager to start their day. Margaretha and Cherry greeted them with warm smiles, and Maggie couldn’t help but feel a swell of gratitude for the friends who had become like family.

“Good morning, Maggie, Thomas,” Margaretha chirped, her apron tied snugly around her waist. “Busy day ahead?”

Maggie chuckled. “As always, Margaretha. But with good company, it hardly feels like work at all.”

Thomas nodded in agreement, his eyes twinkling with mischief. “And don’t forget the delicious treats you always bring us, Margaretha. They’re the highlight of our day.”

The older woman laughed, her laughter filling the room with warmth. “Well, I’ll be sure to whip up something extra special for you two today.”

With a wave, Margaretha disappeared into the back room, leaving Maggie and Thomas to tend to their customers.

The morning passed in a blur of activity, with Maggie and Thomas working tirelessly to serve their patrons with a smile. But amidst the hustle and bustle, they found moments of quiet camaraderie, stealing glances and exchanging knowing smiles that spoke volumes without a single word.

As the clock struck noon, Maggie and Thomas stole a moment of respite, retreating to the small table in the corner of the store for a much-needed break.

“Sometimes, I still can’t believe this is our life,” Maggie mused, her eyes scanning the bustling room around them.

Thomas reached across the table, his hand finding hers in a reassuring grip. “I know what you mean, darling. But every day with you feels like a dream come true.”

They sat in companionable silence for a moment, soaking in the warmth of each other’s presence.

But their moment of solitude was short-lived, as the familiar jingle of the doorbell heralded the arrival of a new customer.

With a shared smile, Maggie and Thomas rose to their feet, ready to face whatever the rest of the day might bring. For in Whispering Pines, where love and community thrived, there was always another adventure just around the corner.

And together, they were ready to face it all, hand in hand.

The afternoon sun cast long shadows across the wooden floor of the diner as Maggie bustled about, serving up hearty meals to the hungry patrons who filled the cozy space. Laughter and chatter filled the air, creating a lively atmosphere that was a testament to the sense of community that flourished in Whispering Pines.

At a corner table, Thomas sat with a group of locals, engaged in animated conversation as they shared stories and jokes over plates piled high with steaming food.

“So, Thomas,” one of the men said, his voice filled with curiosity, “how does it feel to be a married man?”

Thomas grinned, his eyes sparkling with affection. “Well, I can honestly say it’s the best decision I ever made. Every day with Maggie feels like a new adventure.”

The men nodded in agreement, their expressions filled with understanding.

“She’s a special woman, that Maggie,” another man chimed in. “You’re a lucky man, Thomas.”

Thomas’s smile widened, a sense of pride swelling in his chest. “I know I am. And I’ll spend the rest of my days making sure she knows just how much she means to me.”

As the conversation continued, Maggie moved gracefully between tables, her apron dusted with flour and her cheeks flushed with exertion. But despite the hustle and bustle of the busy diner, her smile never faltered, her warmth and kindness touching the hearts of all who crossed her path.

At the counter, Marylou worked tirelessly, her hands moving deftly as she prepared orders with practiced ease. The young woman had become an indispensable part of the team, her dedication and hard work earning her the respect and admiration of her colleagues.

As the afternoon wore on and the last of the patrons filed out of the diner, Maggie and Thomas exchanged a tired but contented smile, their hearts full with the knowledge that they had made a difference in the lives of those around them.

With a sense of satisfaction, they began the task of tidying up, working side by side in comfortable silence as they set the stage for another day of adventure and camaraderie in their beloved town of Whispering Pines.

And as they locked up the diner for the night and made their way home, hand in hand, they knew that no matter what the future held, they would face it together, with love and laughter guiding their way.


As the seasons changed and Whispering Pines embraced the vibrant colors of autumn, the town buzzed with excitement in preparation for the upcoming festivities. The air was crisp with the promise of cooler days ahead, and the scent of wood smoke lingered in the breeze as families gathered around crackling fires to share stories and laughter.

In the heart of town, the general store and diner were abuzz with activity, as Maggie and Thomas worked tirelessly to ensure that everything was ready for the grand celebration that lay ahead. Tables were adorned with colorful decorations, and the tantalizing aroma of freshly baked pies and hearty stews filled the air, drawing hungry visitors from near and far.

Outside, children played gleefully in the streets, their laughter mingling with the cheerful melodies of a local band as they practiced for the upcoming dance. Excitement crackled in the air like electricity, and the sense of anticipation was palpable as the townsfolk eagerly awaited the arrival of the big day.

In the days leading up to the festivities, Maggie and Thomas found themselves surrounded by friends and loved ones, each lending a helping hand to ensure that everything went off without a hitch. From decorating the town square to organizing games and activities for the children, everyone pitched in to make the celebration one to remember.

As the sun set on the eve of the big day, the town square came alive with twinkling lights and the joyful sound of music as the band struck up a lively tune. Couples twirled and spun across the makeshift dance floor, their laughter echoing through the night as they reveled in the joy of the moment.

The night air was crisp and cool as Maggie and Thomas stole a moment away from the bustling celebration. They found themselves beneath the canopy of stars, the distant strains of music and laughter providing a serene backdrop to their private conversation.

Maggie leaned against Thomas, feeling the warmth of his embrace as they stood together, their hearts beating in rhythm with the soft cadence of the night.

“Thomas,” Maggie began, her voice soft yet filled with a quiet excitement, “there’s something I’ve been wanting to tell you.”

Thomas turned to look at her, his eyes filled with curiosity and affection. “What is it, Maggie?” he asked, his voice tender with anticipation.

A smile played at the corners of Maggie’s lips as she took a deep breath, her heart pounding with nervous excitement. “I’ve been thinking a lot about our future together,” she confessed. “About the dreams we have, the life we want to build.”

Thomas’s gaze softened as he listened to Maggie’s words, his heart swelling with love for the woman standing beside him. “And what have you concluded?” he asked, his voice gentle yet filled with a quiet intensity.

Maggie met his gaze, her eyes shining with emotion. “I’ve concluded that there’s nothing I want more than to spend the rest of my days by your side,” she said, her voice steady with conviction.

A rush of warmth flooded Thomas’s chest as he looked into Maggie’s eyes, feeling the depth of her love wash over him. “Maggie,” he whispered, his voice barely above a breath.

But Maggie had one more thing to say. With a soft smile, she reached out to take Thomas’s hands in hers, holding them gently as she met his gaze.

“There’s something else I want to share with you,” Maggie said, her voice filled with awe and wonder.

Thomas’s heart skipped a beat as he felt the weight of Maggie’s words, his breath catching in his throat. “What is it, Maggie?” he asked, his voice barely more than a whisper.

With a smile that lit up the night, Maggie took a deep breath, her eyes shining with joy and anticipation. “I’m pregnant,” she whispered, her voice filled with wonder.

For a moment, the world seemed to stand still as Thomas processed Maggie’s words. Then, as the realization sank in, a radiant smile spread across his face, his eyes shining with unshed tears.

“Pregnant?” he repeated, hardly daring to believe it.

Maggie nodded, her own eyes shining with tears of joy. “Yes, Thomas,” she said softly, her voice trembling with emotion. “We’re going to have a baby.”

With a cry of joy, Thomas swept Maggie into his arms, holding her close as they stood together beneath the starlit sky.

As they embraced beneath the vast expanse of the night sky, Maggie and Thomas knew that their love would endure for all eternity, binding them together in a bond that could never be broken.

Together, Maggie and Thomas were ready to embrace whatever adventures lay ahead, knowing that as long as they had each other, they could weather any storm and celebrate every triumph, side by side, for all the days of their lives.


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16 thoughts on “A Mail-Order Bride’s Hidden Past – Extended Epilogue”

  1. Hello, my dears! I truly hope you enjoyed our couple’s happily ever after! I would love to know which was your favorite part of Thomas and Maggie’s story! Please share your thoughts with me here! Thank you – always! ♥️📚

    1. I really enjoyed the book very much. I just wished the extended part had
      birth of their baby and hoping it was twins. I look forward to getting more of your books on kindle.mi am 91 years old and with my failing eyesight I am so grateful to have the kindle so I can make the print bigger.
      ,I am used to reading 3 books a week.

  2. A delightful book filled with friendship, love, but also with danger.

    But I was disapoointed that God’s name was used so often:
    Ye gods {6 times}
    I swear by all the gods . . . . Pg 103
    Good Lord, & Oh, Lord, {18 times}
    the Bible tells us to never use God’s name in vain – which in Greek & Hebrew states when His name is used in a senseless manner {surprised, excited, etc.}. Just because we hear His name so often used on TV, movies, in public does not make it right. Usually too many use His name instead of a curse word.

  3. What happened to the Maggie’s pregnancy at end of main story when they told her parents that they would be grandparents?
    It is a story within a story with Adrain Blackthorn. We were never told what happened to his two criminal accomplices.
    Overall a page turner.
    Thank you Carol Colyer

  4. I loved the story.Thomas was almost too good be true!! Lots of charactors in the story who were very interesting also.
    I felt like i knew them & wanted to live in Whispering pines.
    Th story was diffrent from most MOB stories.
    Lots of unanswered questions,but a very enjoyable read!!!! a sequel would be great !!!! no new inf. in EE…

  5. I loved this book! It truly made me want t to live in that little town! Thank you for writing it Carol! Martha

  6. A beautiful story filled with adventure, love, town kinship & Whispering Pines is the ideal dream place to live.
    Unfortunately there were many moments where the story dragged on with no substance as if words had to be added to a page to get the number of pages right!

  7. I enjoyed the tale and the characters who brought the story to life. The book club seemed like good fun.
    I always enjoy an epilogue but was confused by the pregnancy revealed because at the end of the main story they had announced a pregnancy. Now as a midwife I have to wonder what may have happened to have two pregnancies within a six month period
    otherwise a good tale

  8. I loved the story line. The characters all added to the enjoyable read. You are one of my favorite authors but as enjoyable as the story
    was, I felt like I was reading a rough draft. Many sections were very mechanical without your normal flow. The extended epilogue carried your expected colorful style.

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